The Prologue currently attached to my new story "The Call." This story I see as way more simple than "The Unaware" and I am using it for training in writing. Well It along with Writing scenes about my new practice charater Alexa, whose battle I just posted.
Well I give you "The Call"
Satrindenad was a dangerous world to live in. Darkness, greif, and anger had filled the land. Humans, Sarths, Elves, and War-Yies alike had tried to live in peace for the sake of their lands, but this peace was one of tolerance; a tolerance that existed for only the means of survival. In this tolerance Humans and War-Yies had drawn thick lines between each other, and the two races bickered without violence; but this was a danger to the land.
In the world a great evil had grown and spread; in a land called Wriv dwelt a dark terror called Despreg who knew nothing of good. He built armies to ravage the peoples of the world not caring who he killed; his only desire was total power over all races. Because of the resistance he encountered he retaliated for a time only to return with greater force. Alliances amoung the races had grown, but these were only words and friendships would not easily be formed. Despreg took advantages of these weaknesses at every turn and soon Elves and Sarths retreated into deep forests and mountains hiding themselves from the evil in fear of being anielated or forced to live as slaves. Because of this the land of Tyven, which was once green with the prosperity of the elves, had become a wild land ift only to harbor the outcasts of other races.
Humans and War-Yies held up resistance but soon the two could agree no longer. A split between the two caused war. Despreg made this war, and both races were two occupied with their own lands to help each other; this only caused them to blame and fight each other rather than the evil.
In the worlds dark hour another race of beings decided to waken hope. The Pyxyes had hidden away in the odd corners of the world for many years but they knew that this new darkness called for them to assist the saving of the world. Amasing their armies thay drove the forces of Despreg, who had all but destroyed the lands of the world, back into Wriv, but they were to late to save any hope of peace between the War-Yies and Humans.
Despreg seemed beated but the Pyxyes knew that this would not last; they had only shooken him and he would return with greater force. They turned to deal with the fights of the War-Yies and Humans cursing them for their hatered. The Pyxyes said that until the humans and the War-Yies could learn how to get along then a chapion who would despel the forces of Wriv from the continent of Sartindenad would never be found. With this curse the Pyxyes fled deep into the secret places of the world and left the broken lands to heal themselves; a task which might take ages to be completed.
You think thats interesting???? No Not really, I wish. We'll see. I love it so far I have a really nice concept for it.
It basically centers around 3 charaters: an elven maiden named Keya (Inaykeyah) who choose to leave the comforts of her people in order to find a way to restore the world. The consequences of her choice is that unless she does an incredibly great deed she can never return.
A small by named Tec (Telian) who was orphaned at birth and knows little of himself or the world around him. He is from a small village and is often shunned because he tends to act differently than most boys his age.
A trader named Jylek who spent his life craving adventure. He keeps himself very secluded from the world, and little is known about his past.
Yeah, thats simple, I think anyway.
I recently wrote a beautiful poem in 15 minutes for my english class I hope I can post it soon!
-Smi's
REVIEW: Brook White's performance of "You Must Love Me" may not have gone over very well but I do find the song incredible. I have her studio recorded version which you can get on itunes. I suggest you check it out. I found Brooke a very unique and moral competitor this year and I hope she goes far.
